初中生活

九年（4）班 谭安琪

Saturday                       June 12^th                              Cloudy

Today I read something about Hong Zhanhui online. I was deeply moved after reading the story. I think he is a brave man.

Hong was born in a poor family. His father became badly ill when he was 11 and his mother left them. He had to work hard to feed his family. And he didn’t accept helps from others. I really admire him.

   In my opinion, he is a superman. His story encourages a lot of people to face difficulties. We should learn to be a strong man and never say “give up”. It will be fine tomorrow.

点评：This the composition of 2009. The author can easily express all the ideas and opinions. I must say the author have a rich feeling in writing.